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RE: [soa-forum] FW: SOA Demo Straw man technical artifacts

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From: "Paul S Prueitt" <psp@xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx>
Date: Thu, 13 Apr 2006 12:29:51 -0600
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the the Approach section of
 
 
 
i suggest replacing
 
Model Driven Architecture techniques will be used to model the community and produce technology interfaces such as WSDL-SOA interfaces, Ws-Security and BPEL business processes –
 
with
 
Model Driven Architecture techniques will be used to model the community and produce technology interfaces that use
 
WSDL-SOA interfaces,
Ws-Security and
BPEL business processes
 
 
the such as is vague and the "that use" is specific (reducing the vagueness)
 
 
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